The Train

Train compartment,Copyright habrda / 123RF Stock Photo

Life, love, and death on a trip from Amsterdam to Paris.

The train picked up speed as it left the station in a little town not far from Amsterdam. We passed so close to a row of houses I felt I could touch them, all neat, all the same. Lace curtains hung in each window, and a dusting of the recent snow still held on the roofs.

The sun’s rays sparkled on the window, refracting light into the cabin of the train. It was cold. I pulled my coat from the seat next to me onto my lap to stop the draft on my legs. My gothic architecture book lay open to the chapter on St. Denis. Reading in French seemed more difficult than usual, and I found myself going over the same paragraph again.

When the cabin door opened with a jarring SNAP, I gave a rabbit-like start as a man stepped into the compartment. He heaved his bag onto the overhead rack, sat down just opposite me, and opened a newspaper, De Telegraaf. He was a good-looking man, not really handsome, but his face was strong and intelligent. Very fit. I returned to St. Denis and read the same paragraph for the fourth time. 

After continuing in this manner for thirty minutes or so, the man folded his paper, set it on the seat next to him, and stared out of the window. Then he turned his gaze from the window and began studying me.

“Goedmorgen,” then looking at my book, “ou peut-être, bonjour?”

“Bonjour.”

“D’où venez-vous?”

“La Nouvelle Orleans.”

“Ah, New Orleans. Then you are American . . .  sorry,” he said.

I thought for a second of asking whether he was sorry that I was American, then thought better of it.

“That’s okay. I’m glad it’s not immediately obvious.”

“No, you are not obvious. You could be Dutch, but appear more French. I wasn’t sure. We don’t get many Americans in November.”

Dutch field in the snow. Copyright: rmorijn', 123RF Stock Photo

Dutch field in the snow. Copyright: rmorijn, 123RF Stock Photo

We were rocking along at a fairly high speed. I looked out of the window for awhile, watching the passing fields, all snowy white. I thought of Martijn’s mother, snug in her old farmhouse, and smiled. I turned back to my work, but had not gone many pages when I realized the man was staring at me. I raised my head, stared back and him, and waited.

“You are going to Paris?”

“Yes, I study there.”

“What brought you to Amsterdam?”

After a brief pause, I answered him. “I am engaged to a man who lives in Hoorn, and I came to meet his family.”

“Ah . . .  So you will move to the Netherlands? Or will the two of you live in the United States?”

“We plan to live in the Netherlands.”

“By the way, I am Piet Maas.”

“Sarah Stewart.” I took the hand he offered. “Good to meet you.”

I glanced down at my book, at the abbey church, then back at Piet. “What takes you to Paris? Business?”

“I am only traveling through Paris headed to Marseilles. And it is neither business nor pleasure.”

I raised an eyebrow.

He laughed and tilted his head back against the headrest, looking up at the luggage rack. “At home, everyone thinks I have lost my mind. I had an important position at a respected bank in Amsterdam. My apartment was large — perfect location. The kind people in the city wait years to get. I’ve been dating someone for almost two years.” 

Amsterdam on a winter morning. Copyright: dennisvdwater, at 123RF Stock Photo.

Amsterdam on a winter morning. Copyright: dennisvdwater, at 123RF Stock Photo.

“One night I was walking home with the thousands of other people who work in the city. It was dark and it was cold. And suddenly, I thought — I am not going to live this life anymore.” Piet looked at me.

“Thea, that’s my girlfriend, gave me a lovely party a week later for my forty-second birthday. While everyone was toasting me, I announced my plans, that I was giving myself the present I had always wanted. In three weeks I would quit my job, leave Amsterdam, and go see the world.”

“When I finished, the room was very quiet. It was my boss who finally spoke.”

“Well, Piet,” he said, “if you want to take a trip, you certainly deserve a vacation. Take extra time — have eight weeks — travel — my birthday present to you. I’ll just take that expensive watch back to the store.”

“Everyone laughed at his little joke, but then I said, “No, you don’t understand. I am leaving, and I am not coming back. I will be handing in my resignation tomorrow. I ship out of Marseille on a cargo boat in three weeks.”

“Absolute silence. Then Thea burst into tears, and the guests all gave excuses for leaving early . . . . “

“All night I tried to explain how I felt to Thea, but it was no good. I know I should have told her privately. Telling her with the others was a coward’s way out. But I wanted no one trying to talk me out of it. It was poorly done, though, and I feel guilty over it.”

I turned to the window. The passing scenery became an indistinct blur, and the hair along the back of my neck prickled.

“Tell me, you are quiet. What do you think? That I have lost my mind?”

I looked at him for a long time. “Hardly. But I am wondering why you should care what a complete stranger thinks.”

“I don’t really . . . but — the last weeks have been so full of logistics. Now I am started, and I have some quiet. And there you are, across from me, watching me.”

“It’s a bad habit of mine, watching people.”

“Yes, same — for me as well. So, for the hell of it, what DO you think?”

“That I am amazed you did it. Think about it, yes . . . .  Do it though? And hopping a tramp steamer — it sounds like a movie script — it reminds me of a story an old journalist once told me. The closest I’ll come to anything like it will be marrying Martijn and leaving the USA behind.”

Piet watched me quietly. We continued contemplating one another until I began feeling uncomfortable. Then he spoke.

“Being married in the Netherlands will not be much different than being married in the United States. You will live in a foreign country and learn a new language, and for awhile, this will be an adventure. The newness will wear off though . . . and one morning, you will wake up and realize that you exchanged one mundane reality for another.”

I thought of the neat, tree lined fields outside of Amsterdam, and Martijn’s orderly approach to his work, indeed to everything he did.

Typical tree-lined fields and canals in the Netherlands. Copyright: rmorijn with 123RF Stock Photo.

Fields and canals in the Netherlands. Copyright: rmorijn with 123RF Stock Photo.

“Perhaps. I suppose I will find out.  — Why don’t you tell me about the ship you are sailing with?”

He frowned, but acquiesced. So the conversation changed course and we passed several hours swapping views on various subjects. The bright sun and snow of the morning gave way to gray winter fields and an overcast afternoon.

Parallel tracks. Copyright: Garry518, 123RF Stock Photo

Parallel tracks. Copyright: Garry518, 123RF Stock Photo

We left Mons, Belgium, and had crossed into France when the train came slowly to a stop. We walked several cars down to get coffee and sweet biscuits which we consumed while continuing to talk. Finally, after almost an hour, the train began to back up, all the way to Mons. There it switched to tracks that paralleled the original set, and moved at a snail’s pace towards Paris.

“Must be a problem on the track up ahead, ” said Piet.

As the train approached the spot where we had been delayed, we stood up to look for the cause. At this point the ground rose abruptly up from the two sets of tracks. It had the effect of a very wide tunnel without a top. Several pedestrian walkways crossed above it.

We had gone a little way past where our cabin had sat for an hour, when the tracks turned crimson. The stone chips of the railway bed were soaked red. As the blood dried, it darkened, so there was a variation from brilliant red to a dull reddish-brown. Then came a leg, severed from its body. The leg wore khaki trousers. The thigh had been shredded as the train tore it from the hip. The torso followed, but it was somewhat obscured by three railroad workers and two officers discussing what was to be done with the mess. A blue workman’s cap lay next to the tracks, shivering slightly in the breeze.

I stood staring, when suddenly I was jerked back and the window shade snapped down. I had not seen Piet moving, and I felt jolted and bewildered.

It is not a thing to look at.”

I stared at the shade, but saw the mutilated thigh. Piet took my shoulders. “Are you alright?”

I nodded. He pulled me to his chest, and for a moment I relaxed and hid my face against his shirt. As I came back to myself, I tried stepping back. Piet looked down at me for a moment, then let go.

“Sometimes this happens . . . I should have suspected. I could have prevented you from seeing that.” Then more quietly, “please forgive me.”

“I, I’ve never — well, I mean . . . never. I mean, I’ve seen corpses in the dissecting room at Tulane medical school. But it wasn’t like this.”

 “It is the blood. So much blood . . .”

“Poor bastard,” he continued. “There are often suicides like this. Frequently in Paris someone jumps in front of the Metro. The engineer cannot stop in time. He sees it all. And he cannot stop it. For the person who jumps, it is all over. It is for the engineer I feel sorry.”

For awhile neither of us said anything. Finally, I said, “I wonder why he did it?”

Piet watched the gray fields. “Because it was easier than going on.”

I looked at him. “But you were unhappy — you felt trapped. You didn’t jump under a train, though — “

“Ah, well. But in the moment when he had no hope left, he couldn’t see a way forward. You are so young . . . . maybe it is something that it takes more life to understand. You see, it is always out there; it is always a possible answer.”

I picked at a loose thread on my cuff and thought I didn’t want to hear anymore of this. The grey afternoon dimmed into twilight and the train sped on towards Paris. As it grew dark, we left the lights off in our compartment. Traffic signals and train stations in passing towns lit our room now and again. We alternately looked outside and at one another, but neither of us spoke.

We reached the edge of Paris, and the train soon pulled into the Gare du Nord. Piet flipped on the lights, and I rose to pull down my bag.

“Let me help you with that.”

“Thanks, but I can handle it.”

He shrugged.

When we moved out of the cabin and down the passage to exit the car, Piet preceded me down the steps, then turned and took my bag from me. I stepped down off of the train and stood in front of him as people hurried around us down the long platform. The old iron roof supports rose high over our heads, the riveted beams full of pigeons gone to roost. Loud speakers blared information concerning departures.

I looked up at Piet. “Well,” I said, “I think . . .”

Piet took my arms, pulled me close and kissed me once, then after looking at me for a long time, again, even deeper and more passionately. The noise and the people disappeared, and the two of us stood alone on the concrete slab.

He pulled back and I stood looking at him, breathless.

“Don’t marry him.”

Piet picked up his bag and walked away, disappearing into the stream of humanity.

Gare du Nord in Paris.

Gare du Nord in Paris.

This is a true story; only the names and other minor facts have been changed. This train from Amsterdam traveled to Paris in late November of 1985. I never saw “Piet” again . . .  Seven months later, I called off my engagement.

 

By Ann Fisher. Copyright 1989 and 2016. All rights reserved.


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50 Comments on The Train

  1. Reblogged this on DREAM BIG DREAM OFTEN and commented:
    One of my dreams is to take a train across Europe!!

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  2. Incredible, so beautifully written. I wish the train from Amsterdam to Paris still looked like the picture at the top.

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  3. Beautiful story, I loved it. Thanks for sharing it.if there’s time to visit my website too…I would live to know your opinion http://www.whattodo.WordPress.com

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  4. This was amazing yet so heartbreaking😭
    Thank you for a lovely read x

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  5. Dean Ann, This is the second time I read this story, I like I can see it happening actually! such a heartwarming true story. You should continue this story and make it more exciting. I hope we will read the second chapter one day!

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  6. Lov’d this . Great work . Incredible post . Thanks for this one . I love to read more of your kind . I appreciate all of ur works . Thanks for giving me this opportunity. Simply loved it !!

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  7. Diana Stevan // May 24, 2016 at 9:06 am // Reply

    Beautifully told! Thank you.

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  8. girlinaus // May 18, 2016 at 6:39 pm // Reply

    I love this

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  9. Renee Sieradski, EA // May 18, 2016 at 12:16 am // Reply

    That must have been some kiss -to alter your life course, unless you were already deep down planning to not marry Piet

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    • You mean Martijn, but no, at that point I felt pretty sure about getting married. It was spending the following summer in the Netherlands with Martijn that made me sure that I did not want to do that. The train journey, with Piet’s own decision, the suicide, and thoughts about life-altering choices gave me pause though. The kiss was minor compared to the whole experience of the day.

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  10. rosytragedynotes // May 17, 2016 at 12:40 am // Reply

    What a beautiful memory. A brief encounter that changed one’s perspective forever.

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  11. Riveting read. I was left wanting more! Piet sounds so mysterious.

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  12. What a beautiful story. I have to admit my hopelessly romantic heart swelled reading this post because I was so immersed in the connection between the two of you – it’s just like a scene from a movie! I wonder what happened with him and how his journey ended up being… I really enjoyed the way you wrote this and I liked the pictures that you added as well. Thank you for sharing this moment of your life with us!

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  13. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story…I was hanging on and hoping the two of you would get together.

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    • Hi Davina, thank you for your time reading, and for the comment. I think that’s the natural thing, the hope – that when there is a connection, the two people might be destined to be together. I did not feel that about Piet. Nor do I think he felt that way about me. I do think he cared, and that he cared that I not make a mistake and become committed too early. At same time, I have wondered what happened to him. We take our easy connectivity for granted now.

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  14. I was drawn into your carriage immediately with the wonderful descriptions and use of language. I have had many encounters with strangers on trains. I believe that every encounter has a reason and a meaning behind them we just need to be open to hearing the message. Sometimes we are more atuned to our subconscious thoughts and strangers are simply the link bringing them into sharp focus.

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  15. Great connect your story had. I particularly liked the strong, purposeful nonsensical first person approach.

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  16. Great story, sorry you called off your engagement though. I hid in a corner of your cabin during the trip. It took me back to Bogart and Bacall on the Orient Express.

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    • Leland, I was — I think 21. Oh, so not ready to be married, so it was a good thing. Piet made me stop and think. Each of us is different, and the right time for making a family is a very individual thing.

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  17. I thoroughly enjoyed the post. It was intriguing to realize you based this on actual events. Great job!

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  18. What an amazing story and I also feel that life brings us to these stories so that we can make some new stories. Fabulous writing Ann.

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  19. explorewithmafaza // May 11, 2016 at 8:14 am // Reply

    I felt like reading moses beach once again. You reminded me of my library days 🙂

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  20. What an amazing story! I’ve seen two dead bodies: a drowned German man on a beach in Spain, and a boy who had just been run over, his neck broken. Perhaps I’ll write about them….

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  21. The story was amazing and thank you for sharing. I am glad to see at the end, it is indicated as a true story. As I thought these things might be romantically unreal for life. And I am not saying about the last kiss. I am talking about his idea of quitting everything and going on, about his realisation for the fear of meaningless repetition, and about your braveness of calling off the engagement. The suicide incident in the story is an example of a person who sees no point in going on, as Piet also said. I used to see it as a coward move, but recently I have changed my mindset, not supporting but maybe more understanding. I am sure your story has shown a bit to the world why people needs to be brave, keep fighting for at least a reason to go on. I am writing this based on how my own experience with your story, it might contrast to your original idea of composing it though 🙂

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  22. Reblogged this on Words, words, words and commented:
    The story is beautifully written, and I would excuse myself from saying additional words besides many other possible reblogs, and you should experience it yourself.

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  23. Sometimes, we don’t really know why things turn out the way they do. Then suddenly something hits you and then, boom, there’s the light. This is amazing. Thank you for sharing! ❤

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  24. Wow. I couldn’t stop reading the post. Such an amazing post.

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  25. I really love the evolution of the plot, the vivid descriptions of surroundings and actions is often subtle, yet effective, plus i’m one who likes an open ended/suddenly ended story. Superb piece 😀

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  26. Enjoyed your firsthand account – not unlike the delightful movie, “Before Sunrise.” Thanks for sharing your story.

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  27. Wow, that was an amazing story. I also felt like I was there with you!

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  28. Simply moving. It’s amazing how simple things can make such an impact to our lives.

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  29. Piet reminded me of Gauguin who left his family to paint. Strong story. A good title also might have been: We don’t get many Americans in November. I liked it a lot.

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  30. Reblogged this on zsyed509.

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  31. Wonderful story! I felt like I was on the train with you.

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  32. Ann @Ann Edwards Photography // May 10, 2016 at 11:51 am // Reply

    you deal with suspense superbly – I was eager to read to the end.

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